kittie88

U got any plans for the rest of the day?

was it busy? I went shopping and spent a lot of money today (but thats nothing new for me! )

yeah I had a 6 week xmas holiday and I am going back up to uni tomoz as I start lectures on Monday!!!

welcome back aimee,dont worry nothing important happened, when does it ever in the rambling thread!!!

Maybe you got too much sleep, I found that if I sleep too much i feel tired the next day instead of refreshed!!! what u been up to today?

Hey ppl! How is everyone today? I am jus packing my stuf up to go to uni tomoz!!! Liz xxx

awww....u been having too many late nights then?

Hi sarah! I am good thanks, jus packing up my stuff ready to go back up to uni tomoz, hows u?

Hi everyone Who is online now??? anyone??? Liz xxx

Thankyou all so much for the feedback and lovely comments, I will post some more tomoz if I can! Hope u are enjoying them so far and I will speak to u all soon!!! Night xxx

Do not apologise you are not being annoying in fact u are being very helpful. But it is ironic cos the way u are suggesting is the way I had originally written it and yeah to be honest I prefer it that way! Thankyou for your compliments to, I jus love to write and if it is anything to do with Mika I am definitely loving it! Anyway, I may do a bit more writing poems before I sleep but I am going offline now so I will hopefully see u tomoz on mfc!!! Night xxx

Cool, i will see u online tomoz then, Night all xxx

Yeah definitely, anyway I better go to bed cos it is 240am and I need to get up in the morning but u will be on tomoz wont u Holly? may have more poems for u to read!!! *hoping that xBillyBrownx gives feedback before Liz goes to bed*

Thanks Holly, I jus need to tidy it up a bit and probably add in a few more stanzas!!!

Good night and thanks for the feedback Barunka!!! xxx

Ok,guys here is the next poem but this one is still a bit rough round the edges but would be great to hear your feedback!!! This one is of course Grace Kelly and rather than use metaphors like Mika did I rewrote it into a literal and blunt meaning of the song! So hope u like it!!! (NO title as of yet) Who are you to state who I am or who I should be? You try to make me conform to your ways to become someone I'm not! I know who I am but you don't seem to understand this do you? I am a unique person, not a crowd follower. Don't try to manipulate me , because it won't work. You think everyone will come in here and change themselves until you are happy, Well I wont! I know who I am and I'm sticking to it!!! There we go, it is quite a short one but it hopefully gets the message accross..so, what do u think? I probably need to add a few more verses but wanted your opinions on it so far and if u think I am going in the right direction for this song!

Ok,guys here is the next poem but this one is still a bit rough round the edges but would be great to hear your feedback!!!

Ok,people before I think about heading off to sleep I can give u a preview of the next poem, it isnt the final draft but it would be great to get some feedback on a work in progress poem, so what do u think? should i post it???

Thanks, yeah I like stuk in the middle as well and hopefully will do that one too!!!

yeah same here which is why I really wanted to rewrite it plus I can use some imagery in it!!!

Thanks, Grace Kelly is almost done, although not so sure about it, doesnt seem as good as billy brown one and erase I am still planning!

Thanks Holls!!! more will be posted as i finish them!!!

Thanks for the feedback.Yeah I think you are right I am a bit too vague on the ideas and plans bit!! I will have to look a the poem u mention, I have heard of the poet jus not the poem!!! I will post some more up when I have finished them,I am jus finishing up Grace Kelly and in the planning stages of Erase!!

I brought up the conversation of where Holly could be!!! only kidding, love ya really Barunk!!!

HOLLLLLLYYYYYYY!!!! U wanna read one of my poems I have written for Mika's pressie, it is on the previous page!! Hows u??