Ok as u asked so nicely here is the rewritten Billy Brown poem, hope u like it!!!
What now?
My life once had a plan,
I felt secure, like I had a purpose in this world
Now, I am standing on the sand, barefooted
with no plans or idea
So, what now?
A new lover? A new place to call my home?
I left my old life when I fell in love with him.
He, that I secretly met everyday,
betraying my wife for the sake of myself.
But now, both are far away from here.
So, what now?
I look out to sea wondering what happens next.
I imagine the waves washing my past away,
clearing the path for my new life to begin.
But do I stay here, settle down once more
build a new life, a new home here?
Or do I move someplace else to start anew?
What now?
So what do u think? I will accept any constructive criticism u have!!!