sparkly1 Posted August 15, 2008 Author Share Posted August 15, 2008 lol looks like I found my poetry files tonight (sorry) but I'm gonna end on one with a different tone . Replaceable And when did you alone decide I had lost my sparkle, and my lustre, When together we have been far and wide. Shunned by you after all these years Hardly believing how You stood up for me against all those sneers. Your new INTEREST she is no patch on me Yet I’m the one on death row You’re vibrant little sweet pea Purple passion lilac violet by name Unlike miss grotty green Insurance claim. Yet I can hear her smugly laughing From the other side of this door Tauntingly she mocks and slyly whispers adieu. My days here I feel are numbered And there’s nothing I can do Now my movements all are lumbered. Just drive me away; I know I’ll have to go There’s no room now in your garage, For one ageing rusting metro. ©2005 Vivienne B. 11/04/2005 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickadee Posted August 15, 2008 Share Posted August 15, 2008 I've just finished reading the whole thread. There are some poems here that I really like. As you said in the last one though, the flavour of soup is not going to appeal to all, everyday. But that's OK. All artists find the same thing, they do not appeal to all the people all the time. Thank God for diversity! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sparkly1 Posted August 15, 2008 Author Share Posted August 15, 2008 ha ha well I have written a new one today, after Mika inspired us to read his poetry blog and I really liked it and the video too, then reading all the comments left there and some really fab poems that some of you lot posted were awesome so anyway here is the first new one I have written in aaaaaaages (don't have time cos I'm Mikafied). Opinions so who is to say if it meets the mark are you REALLY qualified to chalk lines before twisted emotions still, lemons make me wink and squint at the self validation of your opinions. So who is to say your opinions are valid just because you cast them over many thousands of words your arrogance is absurd yet you "know" how much you know. So who is to say how much you know REALLY qualifies you to have that twisted emotion with an air of denied arrogance and acidic snobbery see this wink, squint and wry smile for your opinions .....YOUR opinions. ©Vivienne B 15/8/2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kittie88 Posted August 25, 2008 Share Posted August 25, 2008 i keep missing all these great poems, there isnt a single one i have disliked at the mo, probably because they come accross as powerful and quite strong with emotion and just brilliant in general! Keep it up!! x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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