Sarah_Lollipop Posted February 3, 2008 Share Posted February 3, 2008 good good:thumb_yello: how was your dayy? It was so boring I tidied my room See you later! Bye! Bye bye xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clare Posted February 3, 2008 Author Share Posted February 3, 2008 haha thanks:thumb_yello: okay see you around:) and BE HAPPY! heyy! i'm good thanks and you? good good:thumb_yello: how was your dayy? Good thanks. Want a mint tea? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kittie88 Posted February 3, 2008 Share Posted February 3, 2008 Hello! I am here but not for very long, going to a friend's house soon to watch Sweeney Todd!!! How is everyone? have a gd weekend? Liz xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clare Posted February 3, 2008 Author Share Posted February 3, 2008 Hello! I am here but not for very long, going to a friend's house soon to watch Sweeney Todd!!! How is everyone? have a gd weekend? Liz xxx Hellooooooooooooo!!! How's you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kittie88 Posted February 3, 2008 Share Posted February 3, 2008 Hellooooooooooooo!!! How's you? Clareeeeeeee!!! I am good thanks, hows u? I got your emails the other day, thankyou How was your weekend? been up to much? Liz xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xBillyBrownx Posted February 3, 2008 Share Posted February 3, 2008 Good thanks. Want a mint tea? Yes please:blush-anim-cl: Thanks Clare! It was so boring I tidied my room Aww! well if it's any consolation mine was boring too.. i was applying for the UK visa:mf_rosetinted: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xBillyBrownx Posted February 3, 2008 Share Posted February 3, 2008 Heyy Liz! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kittie88 Posted February 3, 2008 Share Posted February 3, 2008 Heyy Liz! Hey hows u? I have jus finished another poem, I have now written 4 poems, so nearly halfway!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xBillyBrownx Posted February 3, 2008 Share Posted February 3, 2008 Hey hows u? I have jus finished another poem, I have now written 4 poems, so nearly halfway!! I'm good thanks and you? wow that's great why don't you post it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kittie88 Posted February 3, 2008 Share Posted February 3, 2008 I'm good thanks and you?wow that's great why don't you post it? OK as u asked me here it is. The poem is based on Stuck in Middle, and my interpretation of this song is basically that he has reached the age that he wants to break away from his family and become independent and discover who he really is! But his famil'y affection and his affection is keeping him from doing this, thus he is stuck in the middle. This poem is written from his perspective and is talking to his mother, possibly grandmother! Anyway, tell me what u guys think of it? It is still in the editing stages so may be in need of some changing!!! Don’t look at me like that, I need to do this, I need to break free We’re a close family, And nothing will come between us But, the boy you know is all grown up And he needs to fly away To realise who he really is. I’m sorry for what I said, It was never meant to hurt you But you needed to know the truth! This has to happen, I have to do this So, please do not use our family, To get me to stay! I need your support, not your bitter words! I need your smile, not your scorn. I need you to be understanding, not judgemental. Please listen to me, I have not said this to split the family Or to break your heart. I am saying this so that, When we go our separate ways, I will know that I never lied to you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clare Posted February 3, 2008 Author Share Posted February 3, 2008 Clareeeeeeee!!! I am good thanks, hows u? I got your emails the other day, thankyou How was your weekend? been up to much? Liz xxx Yes. Have you seen my myspace layout? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clare Posted February 3, 2008 Author Share Posted February 3, 2008 Yes please:blush-anim-cl: Thanks Clare! Aww! well if it's any consolation mine was boring too.. i was applying for the UK visa:mf_rosetinted: (makes mint teas for everyone) Here you go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clare Posted February 3, 2008 Author Share Posted February 3, 2008 I have to go now. I will see you tomorrow. Sweet dreams. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xBillyBrownx Posted February 3, 2008 Share Posted February 3, 2008 OK as u asked me here it is. The poem is based on Stuck in Middle, and my interpretation of this song is basically that he has reached the age that he wants to break away from his family and become independent and discover who he really is! But his famil'y affection and his affection is keeping him from doing this, thus he is stuck in the middle. This poem is written from his perspective and is talking to his mother, possibly grandmother! Anyway, tell me what u guys think of it? It is still in the editing stages so may be in need of some changing!!! Don’t look at me like that, I need to do this, I need to break free We’re a close family, And nothing will come between us But, the boy you know is all grown up And he needs to fly away To realise who he really is. I’m sorry for what I said, It was never meant to hurt you But you needed to know the truth! This has to happen, I have to do this So, please do not use our family, To get me to stay! I need your support, not your bitter words! I need your smile, not your scorn. I need you to be understanding, not judgemental. Please listen to me, I have not said this to split the family Or to break your heart. I am saying this so that, When we go our separate ways, I will know that I never lied to you! oooh that's exactly what i thought he was trying to say.. i love itt:thumb_yello: but maybe replace 'bitter words' with something else because it's a direct quotes from the song? you are an excellent poet indeed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kittie88 Posted February 3, 2008 Share Posted February 3, 2008 I have to go now. I will see you tomorrow. Sweet dreams. ok night Clare, sweet dreams to u too xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xBillyBrownx Posted February 3, 2008 Share Posted February 3, 2008 I have to go now. I will see you tomorrow. Sweet dreams. Night Clare Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kittie88 Posted February 3, 2008 Share Posted February 3, 2008 oooh that's exactly what i thought he was trying to say.. i love itt:thumb_yello: but maybe replace 'bitter words' with something else because it's a direct quotes from the song?you are an excellent poet indeed Thankyou,you are too kind, I just like writing, and I think I should chaneg those words, I will let u know what I have changed them too but I am jus going to a friend's house now so I will be on later Bye xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clare Posted February 4, 2008 Author Share Posted February 4, 2008 Clare walks into the Chill out Zone. Hi guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xBillyBrownx Posted February 4, 2008 Share Posted February 4, 2008 Hey Clare!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clare Posted February 4, 2008 Author Share Posted February 4, 2008 Hey Clare!! Heyyyy!!! How are you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xBillyBrownx Posted February 4, 2008 Share Posted February 4, 2008 I'm good thanks How are you? how was your day?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clare Posted February 4, 2008 Author Share Posted February 4, 2008 I'm good thanks How are you?how was your day?? My day was fine thanks. I went shopping. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
babuccia Posted February 4, 2008 Share Posted February 4, 2008 Someone here in tonight? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xBillyBrownx Posted February 4, 2008 Share Posted February 4, 2008 My day was fine thanks. I went shopping. Luckyy:wub2: Buy anything special? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clare Posted February 4, 2008 Author Share Posted February 4, 2008 Hellooooooooo!!!! Anyone in? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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