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Just popped in here. And saw that you said Southern Hospitality. Which means since you are officially in NY, you should totally check out Justin timberlake's restaurant! As you know, he's my otha' lova'. :roftl: Anyway, his restaurant in NY is called Southern Hospitality and it's in the city. He's from Memphis. Being from New England, I thought it was GOOD.

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Hey I am here!! also good news..I have written the next poem, I had a lot of trouble with this one. It is for the song 'Erase' and is written from the female/lover's point of view! Hope you enjoy and please give me some feedback as this is only a draft and may need adjusting!

 

What did you expect to gain from that message?

For me to come running back to you?

I won’t do that anymore, I can’t do that anymore!

But why did it hurt so much when I heard your voice?

 

I thought I was over you,

Yet you still haunt my dreams,

Your presence still remains,

In this house full of memories!

 

But I can’t go back, I won’t go back

To the way things used to be!

Yet, why do I feel like this ?

 

I have moved on,

I am meeting new people rebuilding my life.

But there still remains an empty space in my life, in my heart,

which nobody has been able to fill since you left!

 

But still, how could you do this to me?

It has been such a long time,

I finally started to forget you!

But now you are all I think about!

 

I am so confused,

I don’t know how I feel right now

This pain, this anger,

and then there is the one feeling I almost forgot about,

after you left.

The true, deep, meaningful love I felt for you!

 

 

See what you have done?

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Hey I am here!! also good news..I have written the next poem, I had a lot of trouble with this one. It is for the song 'Erase' and is written from the female/lover's point of view! Hope you enjoy and please give me some feedback as this is only a draft and may need adjusting!

 

What did you expect to gain from that message?

For me to come running back to you?

I won’t do that anymore, I can’t do that anymore!

But why did it hurt so much when I heard your voice?

 

I thought I was over you,

Yet you still haunt my dreams,

Your presence still remains,

In this house full of memories!

 

But I can’t go back, I won’t go back

To the way things used to be!

Yet, why do I feel like this ?

 

I have moved on,

I am meeting new people rebuilding my life.

But there still remains an empty space in my life, in my heart,

which nobody has been able to fill since you left!

 

But still, how could you do this to me?

It has been such a long time,

I finally started to forget you!

But now you are all I think about!

 

I am so confused,

I don’t know how I feel right now

The pain, the anger, and then there is the one feeling I almost forgot after you left.

The true, deep, meaningful love I felt for you!

 

 

See what you have done?

 

u are a really good poet!!! i envy u soo much! my favorite line is

"Your presence still remains,

In this house full of memories!"

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u are a really good poet!!! i envy u soo much! my favorite line is

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Thanks Aimee, I really hope Mika likes these poems,they are taking quite a long time, and a lot of planning! But I love writing so its not a chore for me!!!

 

:huglove:

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Thanks Aimee, I really hope Mika likes these poems,they are taking quite a long time, and a lot of planning! But I love writing so its not a chore for me!!!

 

:huglove:

 

lucky! i hate writing! i am horrible at it i am only good at writing on the mfc! hahaha care to write my english essays for me:wink2:

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lucky! i hate writing! i am horrible at it i am only good at writing on the mfc! hahaha care to write my english essays for me:wink2:

:biggrin2: Haha same here...! The essay thing is a good idea :mf_rosetinted: .. Oh... gosh... I can't write my essays in english :( *sob*

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Yayy people are hereee

 

Wow Liz this is SO good! This one's my favourite so far!! I think it's brilliant! I'm sure Mika will love them hehe.. Maybe one day you'll co-write one of his songs with him..

 

Thanks, this one took me absolutely ages to write, I found it hard to get the angle on it right but then one night, really late I was feeling quite down and was thinking a lot and I came up with this one finally! After about three attempts!

 

How amazing would it be to co write a song? :wink2:

 

Thankyou for all your lovely comments, I have started planning the next one so watch this space :wub2:

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