Neiobi Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 Bye Carlota! Byebye! Have fun here, and kill me if I loose a new blog! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAK1 Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 Well, all this talk of poetry inspired me to write a poem.Feel free to critique it all you like, I'm no poet. But what I'm really curious to see is people's interpretations of it, so analyze away. Oh and there is a person on here who may recognize some of her own words in it, as it was written after a conversation we had. Please try not to guess, if you work out who you are.... The Boxes (Not it's real title, but the real one reveals all) The boxes lie, unopened, before me. I see what any casual observer can see. The boxes. Their form, their shape, their colour. But that is all. I cannot see what lies inside them. I cannot open the boxes. I am told that inside some are great treasures, that their outer guise is not always an indicator of what may be found within. I am told that others have opened the boxes and that for many the treasures differ. I am told that with repeated attentions, I too may be able to open the boxes. Tick tock. Time passes I leave. I return. I cannot open the boxes. I am told the method is gentle but insistent, a teasing open, that the boxes almost need to be coaxed to give up their treasures. I am told that anyone can open the boxes without especial instruction. I am told that although the outer may not always reflect the inner, for some they do point the way to what may be found inside. Tick tock. Time passes. I leave. I return. I cannot open the boxes. Maybe the treasures are not for the likes of me after all. Maybe I will never know what treasures lie within the boxes. I decide I don't want to know. I feign indifference. I become indifferent. The boxes lie, unopened, before me. I'm not gonna be around for a while, but I hope this helps to keep you entertained for a while and I will explain later what it was all about. It's been a while since I did poem analysis, but I thnk I see what this one is about. The boxes represent some one who has built walls around themselves, to protect themselves from being exposed and hurt by people around them. Am I close? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xlindee Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 Byebye! Have fun here, and kill me if I loose a new blog! Killing people doesn't solve anything:mf_rosetinted: It's been a while since I did poem analysis, but I thnk I see what this one is about.The boxes represent some one who has built walls around themselves, to protect themselves from being exposed and hurt by people around them. Am I close? Wow, thats smart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JackViolet Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 :-) Somehow, chickadee, I think not many will be able to figure out the meaning of your boxes. How fitting! (although now maybe, with this hint...) --Jack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oakie Doke Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 CD, I'm bad at poetry, I don't realy get it. I don't get those ones on MS But your's sort of makes sense (to me). The boxes hold/sybolise something the person could have if they put their mind to it, like some hope or dream or something, but then they decide it'll take too much effort to get it and they give up and convince themselves they didn't really want it anyway. Or something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
katydid1994 Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 BLOG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He has a tatoo??????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xlindee Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 BLOG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He has a tatoo??????? WHAT?*goes looking* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xlindee Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 it's not his arm:doh: He does't have an idea who's arm it is:naughty: Its a nice tattoo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vanessa Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 BLOG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He has a tatoo??????? I don't think it's his but i love that tatoo ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
babspanky Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 Those drawings are quite good, I quite like them but as my response to art is so lukewarm, I won't comment on these blogs. Question - do you feel you have to comment on all of his blogs and if so why? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xlindee Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 Those drawings are quite good, I quite like them but as my response to art is so lukewarm, I won't comment on these blogs.Question - do you feel you have to comment on all of his blogs and if so why? No. I only have commented on...I don't know..5 or 6 blogs? Half of the time I don't know what to comment. Especially on the art blogs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xlindee Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 Another blog:blink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
babspanky Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 No. I only have commented on...I don't know..5 or 6 blogs? Half of the time I don't know what to comment. Especially on the art blogs. Yes I am the same, because although I find some of the art stuff a bit interesting, I just am not big on art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
katydid1994 Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 Well he says If I was to get another tattoo So what's the first one I wonder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
katydid1994 Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 Those drawings are quite good, I quite like them but as my response to art is so lukewarm, I won't comment on these blogs.Question - do you feel you have to comment on all of his blogs and if so why? No I don't comment on every one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vanessa Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 Those drawings are quite good, I quite like them but as my response to art is so lukewarm, I won't comment on these blogs.Question - do you feel you have to comment on all of his blogs and if so why? No i didn't comment on all his blogs ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xlindee Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 Well he says If I was to get another tattoo So what's the first one I wonder Huh, I don't see it. I just see: ''If I was to get a tattoo'':blink:Or he has just changed it.. Perhaps he has one, but in a very special place:das: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoseOle Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 Huh, I don't see it. I just see: ''If I was to get a tattoo'':blink:Or he has just changed it..Perhaps he has one, but in a very special place:das: I don't see it either... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
babspanky Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 No I don't comment on every one No i didn't comment on all his blogs ! :naughty:Actually I think I have asked that question in the wrong place, you lot just come back and comment here. I should ask it in the blog I guess! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue Sky Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 Well he says If I was to get another tattoo So what's the first one I wonder He just realised he gave too much information????:roftl: He changed it!! But the comments show him up...what did he think, that we wouldn't notice that??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xlindee Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 I don't see it either... I think she either read it wrong, or he changed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dilek Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 CD, I'm bad at poetry, I don't realy get it. I don't get those ones on MS oh thank you! i was blaming my english for that, since even you don't understand them it's ok:naughty: No. I only have commented on...I don't know..5 or 6 blogs? Half of the time I don't know what to comment. Especially on the art blogs. same here, i only comment if i have something funny to say... or something about Dr. Seuss:naughty: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
katydid1994 Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 I don't see it either... OHHHHHHHHH he changed it!!!! I swear it said another, I even copied and pasted And I commented another tatoo, what's the first one? and he didn't approve it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mika-fan1001 Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 Well he says If I was to get another tattoo So what's the first one I wonder wait. i missed the ANOTHER part. *heads mack to re-read MS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mika-fan1001 Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 OHHHHHHHHH he changed it!!!! I swear it said another, I even copied and pasted And I commented another tatoo, what's the first one? and he didn't approve it o god! haha i was like WHERES HIS OHTER ONE?! lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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