Micah Posted January 22, 2013 Author Share Posted January 22, 2013 Yep. We started this out really disorganized' date=' and the book paid the price I say we don't let those summer nights go to waste! [/quote'] :naughty:Yeah. Do we have a brief overview that I can add to the front page? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarryEyed<3 Posted January 22, 2013 Share Posted January 22, 2013 :naughty:Yeah. Do we have a brief overview that I can add to the front page? Dunno! Maybe we should start over a little. Come up with a basic message and plot line. Think Fairytale- Grimm Brothers, Moriarty style with a twist of Alice. It needs a moral and an execution. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Micah Posted January 22, 2013 Author Share Posted January 22, 2013 Dunno! Maybe we should start over a little. Come up with a basic message and plot line. Think Fairytale- Grimm Brothers' date=' Moriarty style with a twist of Alice. It needs a moral and an execution. [/quote'] We need a more 1, 2, 3 set up. We were just kind of winging it earlier. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Micah Posted January 22, 2013 Author Share Posted January 22, 2013 I'm sorry, but the front page makes me look like one organized motherf*cker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarryEyed<3 Posted January 22, 2013 Share Posted January 22, 2013 We need a more 1, 2, 3 set up. We were just kind of winging it earlier. Yep. So, moral. What do we want the book to say, what's something we can do with a whimsical twist? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Micah Posted January 22, 2013 Author Share Posted January 22, 2013 Yep. So' date=' moral. What do we want the book to say, what's something we can do with a whimsical twist?[/quote'] "Don't do acid. It f*cks you up. Here's proof." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarryEyed<3 Posted January 22, 2013 Share Posted January 22, 2013 "Don't do acid. It f*cks you up. Here's proof." now Micah dear. This was inspired by children's books, so let's make it real! An actual moral. Structure was lacking the first time we tried so we need a lot of it now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Micah Posted January 22, 2013 Author Share Posted January 22, 2013 Awwww, our Deviant page is making me so nostalgic. So many memories. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Micah Posted January 22, 2013 Author Share Posted January 22, 2013 now Micah dear. This was inspired by children's books' date=' so let's make it real! An actual moral. Structure was lacking the first time we tried so we need a lot of it now.[/quote'] I don't know! I never read many children's books growing up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarryEyed<3 Posted January 22, 2013 Share Posted January 22, 2013 I don't know! I never read many children's books growing up! Think. Little red riding hood, nursery rhymes like the muffin man. Things like that. Ring around the rosies, pocket full of posies, ashes, ashes.. Like that. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Micah Posted January 22, 2013 Author Share Posted January 22, 2013 Think. Little red riding hood' date=' nursery rhymes like the muffin man. Things like that. Ring around the rosies, pocket full of posies, ashes, ashes.. Like that. XD[/quote'] Why does it have to be already used? Why don't we write our own? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarryEyed<3 Posted January 22, 2013 Share Posted January 22, 2013 Why does it have to be already used? Why don't we write our own? We shall write our own! I was pointing out tone. Sinister undercurrents would work well I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Micah Posted January 22, 2013 Author Share Posted January 22, 2013 We shall write our own! I was pointing out tone. Sinister undercurrents would work well I think. I got one! The moral should be, "F*ck bitches. Get money." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarryEyed<3 Posted January 22, 2013 Share Posted January 22, 2013 I got one! The moral should be, "F*ck bitches. Get money." Children's book. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Micah Posted January 22, 2013 Author Share Posted January 22, 2013 Children's book. I don't know! You shoot something! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarryEyed<3 Posted January 22, 2013 Share Posted January 22, 2013 I don't know! You shoot something! I remember reading a lot of Aesop's fables when I was a kid. The moral of one of his stories was Man is what he believes. yes no maybe so? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Micah Posted January 22, 2013 Author Share Posted January 22, 2013 I remember reading a lot of Aesop's fables when I was a kid. The moral of one of his stories was Man is what he believes. yes no maybe so? lkdjfaskldfjal;sdfjasldkfjas;ldfjasl;dfksd f freaking perfect. Love it. I vote yes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarryEyed<3 Posted January 22, 2013 Share Posted January 22, 2013 lkdjfaskldfjal;sdfjasldkfjas;ldfjasl;dfksd f freaking perfect. Love it. I vote yes. Perfect, so we can use the dream world to reflect each character's true colors, if you will! Now we do need a solid plot, I believe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Micah Posted January 22, 2013 Author Share Posted January 22, 2013 Perfect' date=' so we can use the dream world to reflect each character's true colors, if you will! Now we do need a solid plot, I believe.[/quote'] Okay, opening scene. Go. Where do you want to start? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarryEyed<3 Posted January 22, 2013 Share Posted January 22, 2013 Okay, opening scene. Go. Where do you want to start? I always pictured it starting with Mika in her attic bedroom, in her bed, asleep. And then she would wake up and go downstairs. We should try to do a plot overview first though, I think. So we know where we're taking things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Micah Posted January 22, 2013 Author Share Posted January 22, 2013 I always pictured it starting with Mika in her attic bedroom' date=' in her bed, asleep. And then she would wake up and go downstairs. We should try to do a plot overview first though, I think. So we know where we're taking things.[/quote']We could do like a collage. Or like, in her bedroom with little plot references all around her room. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarryEyed<3 Posted January 22, 2013 Share Posted January 22, 2013 We could do like a collage. Or like, in her bedroom with little plot references all around her room. What do you mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Micah Posted January 22, 2013 Author Share Posted January 22, 2013 What do you mean? Like, have your idea. In her bed sleeping. But little references of things around her room that will have a play in the plot later on. Her chicken. Like, *humour me* Let's say she's *for example* she's running from something and they throw a ninja star at her. We could have a ninja star stuck in her wall. You feel me? It doesn't have to be that, but that's the idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarryEyed<3 Posted January 22, 2013 Share Posted January 22, 2013 Like, have your idea. In her bed sleeping. But little references of things around her room that will have a play in the plot later on. Her chicken. Like, *humour me* Let's say she's *for example* she's running from something and they throw a ninja star at her. We could have a ninja star stuck in her wall. You feel me? It doesn't have to be that, but that's the idea. Maybe that could work! I like it! have we any ideas for a plot line? So she comes downstairs, and her mother. Right? More characters? We should give some more characters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Micah Posted January 22, 2013 Author Share Posted January 22, 2013 Maybe that could work! I like it! have we any ideas for a plot line? So she comes downstairs' date=' and her mother. Right? More characters? We should give some more characters.[/quote'] I like that idea. Okay. I'm updating front page. 1. In bed asleep. brief references. 2. Comes downstairs. 3. Maybe EMD Mother scene? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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