Humphrey Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 *tries to hide dirty thoughts* I don't know what you mean Elina... We are totally innocent... x sure we are HHMMMM... Okay... Random love it is then lol x random love!?! :roftl: sry! just sounded so.. random? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monshi Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 One If my life has just begun Why do I feel like nothing’s fun? I’m moving away from the people I know My mind feels muffled, like it’s covered in snow The sky is turning grey above me I look up and swirling clouds are all I see Rain drops start slipping down my cheeks and neck They’re plunging down and littering the pavement with little specks Two You lie here with me, your arms around my waist I bite my lips; they’re still fresh with your taste Your hands stroke my hips and thighs My head feels heavy as I let out a sigh Your kisses are sweet as you place them on my back Your breath is quick like you’re having a panic attack I turn to face you and I watch your eyes They are a subtle grey blue with the darkness of skies (I wrote those but they don't have names lol) x I love these. Both of them. You write beautifully. I'm full of emotions. And that's what I love about reading poems. Wonderful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherry_baby Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 sure we are random love!?! :roftl: sry! just sounded so.. random? To me random love.. Is like loving someone and you don't know why, but also loving someone who doesn't love you back LOL. Here it is : Six Why do I love you, I just don’t understand You walk over and kiss me, take me by the hand Lead me away from the world that I hate Look at me crying, I’m in such a state My heart is aching for you to feel the same But you kiss my forehead; to you it’s a game My feelings are twisted, confusing and wrong I’ve dealt with this alone for far too long x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherry_baby Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 I love these.Both of them. You write beautifully. I'm full of emotions. And that's what I love about reading poems. Wonderful. Thank you hun... *smiling lots* I love when people like my stuff x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laura Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 To me random love..Is like loving someone and you don't know why, but also loving someone who doesn't love you back LOL. Here it is : Six Why do I love you, I just don’t understand You walk over and kiss me, take me by the hand Lead me away from the world that I hate Look at me crying, I’m in such a state My heart is aching for you to feel the same But you kiss my forehead; to you it’s a game My feelings are twisted, confusing and wrong I’ve dealt with this alone for far too long x *stands up and claps* thats wonderful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatRadFreak Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 To me random love..Is like loving someone and you don't know why, but also loving someone who doesn't love you back LOL. Here it is : Six Why do I love you, I just don’t understand You walk over and kiss me, take me by the hand Lead me away from the world that I hate Look at me crying, I’m in such a state My heart is aching for you to feel the same But you kiss my forehead; to you it’s a game My feelings are twisted, confusing and wrong I’ve dealt with this alone for far too long x Oh thats beautiful! i love it! i feel so emotional lol xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatRadFreak Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 *stands up and claps* thats wonderful Ditto! -stands and claps too- =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherry_baby Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 *stands up and claps* thats wonderful Oh thats beautiful!i love it! i feel so emotional lol xD *bows* Would you like another one, or would that be too many? Don't worry if you don't want another one x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Humphrey Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 To me random love..Is like loving someone and you don't know why, but also loving someone who doesn't love you back LOL. Here it is : Six Why do I love you, I just don’t understand You walk over and kiss me, take me by the hand Lead me away from the world that I hate Look at me crying, I’m in such a state My heart is aching for you to feel the same But you kiss my forehead; to you it’s a game My feelings are twisted, confusing and wrong I’ve dealt with this alone for far too long x oh.. wow..! it's amazing! I don't really know what to say! But just like Mona put it, you write so beautifully and I'm full of emotions. You move people with your writing, just like a poem (or any writing) is supposed to! I am a huuuge fan of yours! pure love Thank you hun... *smiling lots* I love when people like my stuff x how can we not! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Humphrey Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 *bows* Would you like another one, or would that be too many? Don't worry if you don't want another one x WE WANT MORE! (or atleast I do!) by the way... it said "six".. did I miss three, four and five..? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherry_baby Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 oh.. wow..! it's amazing! I don't really know what to say! But just like Mona put it, you write so beautifully and I'm full of emotions. You move people with your writing, just like a poem (or any writing) is supposed to! I am a huuuge fan of yours! pure love how can we not! haha, I'm actually blushing Thanks so much Elina x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherry_baby Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 WE WANT MORE! (or atleast I do!) by the way... it said "six".. did I miss three, four and five..? I don't name my poems I just number them as I do them. You didn't miss them I just didn't post them haha Four Silver bath taps, gold leaf mirrors Soft sweet skin and pierced ears Pearls and diamonds hanging around Shiny wooden panels cover the ground Lace and satin coat the windows And the giant dining table has never felt elbows Light reflects off a tall glass of water She sits and thinks about the things life has taught her x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laura Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 *bows* Would you like another one, or would that be too many? Don't worry if you don't want another one x *throws roses* *nods head* yes please......well as long as its ok with you:thumb_yello: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Humphrey Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 haha, I'm actually blushing Thanks so much Elina x thank YOU! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatRadFreak Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 *bows* Would you like another one, or would that be too many? Don't worry if you don't want another one x more more MORE! lol =] aslong as you dont overwork yourself like the Big M seems to be doing [and if your reading this mika, take a break!] =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CazGirl Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 hey sexy ladies, please check out my new thread! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monshi Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 Thank you hun... *smiling lots* I love when people like my stuff x but you're really good!! the last one proves it! #6. To me random love..Is like loving someone and you don't know why, but also loving someone who doesn't love you back LOL. Here it is : Six Why do I love you, I just don’t understand You walk over and kiss me, take me by the hand Lead me away from the world that I hate Look at me crying, I’m in such a state My heart is aching for you to feel the same But you kiss my forehead; to you it’s a game My feelings are twisted, confusing and wrong I’ve dealt with this alone for far too long x I mean! it's really really really good. I'm all emotional! Ditto!-stands and claps too- =] *stands up and claps 3* Amazing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laura Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 moremore MORE! lol =] aslong as you dont overwork yourself like the Big M seems to be doing [and if your reading this mika, take a break!] =] i might send him a Kit Kat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatRadFreak Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 I don't name my poems I just number them as I do them. You didn't miss them I just didn't post them haha Four Silver bath taps, gold leaf mirrors Soft sweet skin and pierced ears Pearls and diamonds hanging around Shiny wooden panels cover the ground Lace and satin coat the windows And the giant dining table has never felt elbows Light reflects off a tall glass of water She sits and thinks about the things life has taught her x tis well cool i liked this loads, cos it was all like a perfect house that was so fake, and then the last line was a bit iffy for me but i still loved it! -feels guilty- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Humphrey Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 I don't name my poems I just number them as I do them. You didn't miss them I just didn't post them haha Four Silver bath taps, gold leaf mirrors Soft sweet skin and pierced ears Pearls and diamonds hanging around Shiny wooden panels cover the ground Lace and satin coat the windows And the giant dining table has never felt elbows Light reflects off a tall glass of water She sits and thinks about the things life has taught her x oh, ok but.... you are now officially my idol *stands on knees and worships* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatRadFreak Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 i might send him a Kit Kat i was thinking about that after i posted xD have a break have a kit kat =] but he has to marry me to get the kit kat xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monshi Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 I don't name my poems I just number them as I do them. You didn't miss them I just didn't post them haha Four Silver bath taps, gold leaf mirrors Soft sweet skin and pierced ears Pearls and diamonds hanging around Shiny wooden panels cover the ground Lace and satin coat the windows And the giant dining table has never felt elbows Light reflects off a tall glass of water She sits and thinks about the things life has taught her x I liked this one ALOT! (not as much as 1 and 2, sorry.) but better then the others, sorry. do you even want me to say what I think. Cuz I can def shut up if you want that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Humphrey Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 hey sexy ladies, please check out my new thread! hey sexy lady! I like your flow... will do! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherry_baby Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 i might send him a Kit Kat :roftl: x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CazGirl Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 sherry your poetry is amazing i wrote a poem shortly after i got heartbroken last year...i'd share it with you but its upstairs and i cant be bothered LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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