Monshi Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 I liked this one ALOT! (not as much as 1 and 2, sorry.) but better then the others, sorry. do you even want me to say what I think.Cuz I can def shut up if you want that. Hah! I'm quoting myself But I must say, I read it again, and I liked it more now. I'm gonna read it again. I think it's one of those that grow on me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherry_baby Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 tis well cool i liked this loads, cos it was all like a perfect house that was so fake, and then the last line was a bit iffy for me but i still loved it! -feels guilty- oh, ok but.... you are now officially my idol *stands on knees and worships* I liked this one ALOT! (not as much as 1 and 2, sorry.) but better then the others, sorry. do you even want me to say what I think.Cuz I can def shut up if you want that. It's okay girls Like I always say : I never take anything the wrong way So I DEFINATELY appreciate all your opinions You can't like everything all the time! x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Humphrey Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 my favourite line in "four" And the giant dining table has never felt elbows brilliant! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherry_baby Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 sherry your poetry is amazing i wrote a poem shortly after i got heartbroken last year...i'd share it with you but its upstairs and i cant be bothered LOL Thanks hun:blush-anim-cl: And I would love to read yours!! Maybe when you can be bothered haha x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Humphrey Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 It's okay girls Like I always say : I never take anything the wrong way So I DEFINATELY appreciate all your opinions You can't like everything all the time! x don't worry, I love it all! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laura Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 i was thinking about that after i posted xDhave a break have a kit kat =] but he has to marry me to get the kit kat xD he wont ever get that kit kat then will he sherry your poetry is amazing i wrote a poem shortly after i got heartbroken last year...i'd share it with you but its upstairs and i cant be bothered LOL go get it!! right ladies, i have to go now, probs be back later though send me your poems Sherry!! love y'all xxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherry_baby Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 my favourite line in "four" And the giant dining table has never felt elbows brilliant! Thanks Elina Elbows was the only word I could think of to rhyme with windows lol And then I thought of manners and stuff.. You know you're not supposed to put your elbows on the table when you eat or something x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherry_baby Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 right ladies, i have to go now, probs be back later though send me your poems Sherry!! love y'all xxxxx Bye bye DL!! I will PM them to you if I write anymore. *hugs* x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherry_baby Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 don't worry, I love it all! Thanks hun You're my #1 fan hahahaha x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monshi Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 It's okay girls Like I always say : I never take anything the wrong way So I DEFINATELY appreciate all your opinions You can't like everything all the time! x but now I love it even more!! It's amazing. I love poems like this. Poems that make me feel different things everytime I read them The sixth one is def one of those. Love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laura Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 Bye bye DL!! I will PM them to you if I write anymore. *hugs* x DS!! thank you!! *hugs* xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monshi Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 right ladies, i have to go now, probs be back later though send me your poems Sherry!! love y'all xxxxx Bye luuuuv *hugs* see you later!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Humphrey Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 he wont ever get that kit kat then will he go get it!! right ladies, i have to go now, probs be back later though send me your poems Sherry!! love y'all xxxxx bye!! see ya! and Caz, we'd love to read it if you want to share! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Humphrey Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 Thanks Elina Elbows was the only word I could think of to rhyme with windows lol And then I thought of manners and stuff.. You know you're not supposed to put your elbows on the table when you eat or something x I know! really, I love that line. very clever Thanks hun You're my #1 fan hahahaha x YES I AM!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherry_baby Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 but now I love it even more!! It's amazing. I love poems like this. Poems that make me feel different things everytime I read them The sixth one is def one of those. Love it! I'm glad I love creating peoples emotion I love writing soooo much Just say if I post too many lol I may get carried away!! x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherry_baby Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 I know! really, I love that line. very clever YES I AM!!! :biggrin2: *hugs* x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monshi Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 I'm glad I love creating peoples emotion I love writing soooo much Just say if I post too many lol I may get carried away!! x Not at all. I would like it if you posted some more. but no pressure... You do write beautifully, as I said before. You could easily have a career in writing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherry_baby Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 Not at all. I would like it if you posted some more. but no pressure... You do write beautifully, as I said before. You could easily have a career in writing Thanks hun This one is autobiographical Seven Life has a secret, which fate will never tell But it flashed before my eyes when I was told how you fell My heart was racing as I rushed to find you I ran across the dry grass, she ran with me too When we got to your side, you were quiet and pale I stroked your hand as you lay there, you looked so frail She stared as I kissed your heaving chest You opened your eyes and I told you to rest x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hotdlp Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 hey people, soz i went without saying bye.. my teacher came to check up on me and i couldn't get back on.. anyways what u guys talking about? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monshi Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 Thanks hun This one is autobiographical Seven Life has a secret, which fate will never tell But it flashed before my eyes when I was told how you fell My heart was racing as I rushed to find you I ran across the dry grass, she ran with me too When we got to your side, you were quiet and pale I stroked your hand as you lay there, you looked so frail She stared as I kissed your heaving chest You opened your eyes and I told you to rest x owh, that's so beautiful. makes me sad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherry_baby Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 hey people, soz i went without saying bye.. my teacher came to check up on me and i couldn't get back on.. anyways what u guys talking about? Nothing much I'm just posting a few poems x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monshi Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 hey people, soz i went without saying bye.. my teacher came to check up on me and i couldn't get back on.. anyways what u guys talking about? heeeeey hun!! *hugs* Sherry's posting some great poems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherry_baby Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 owh, that's so beautiful. makes me sad Good! It's meant to make people sad, it was a sad event lol x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monshi Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 Good! It's meant to make people sad, it was a sad event lol x not good well, a little good, if you intended it to be sad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hotdlp Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 oh cool.. just read the seventh one.. its sweet and sad at the same time (if that makes sense) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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